The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

The bar chart gives information about the export of thousands of cars in Uzbekistan during the period from 2014 to 2019.

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both companies exhibited different trends over the given period, one followed an upward trajectory,

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fluctuated throughout the years.

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, the extent and frequency of these fluctuations varied among them. As the chart shows, in 2014, company A began at 200,000 cars and dropped moderately to around 150,000 in 2015, maintained an upward trend, reaching approximately 275,000 in 2016.

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, it declined considerably to almost 175,000 in 2017 and continued to grow drastically to 300,000

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, company B commenced at nearly 225,000 in 2014,

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increased slowly to over 250,000 in 2015.

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, it fell rapidly to 200,000 in 2016 and climbed quickly to reach 275,000 in 2017.

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, it rose dramatically to slightly over 300,000, reaching its highest point by 2018.

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The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Thesedays, problems with pollution are becoming worse, particularly in large cities. What are the reasons for this and how can this be solved? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary schoolsuch as reading,writing and math How far do you agree or disagree?

you have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: *Explain the situation *Describe why it bothers you *Suggest a solution

you have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in and has been making a lot of noise, which disturbs you. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe why it bothers you *Suggest a solution