There is construction taking place near your home and the noise is disturbing you. Write a letter to your local council. In the letter, Describe the construction Explain why the construction is a problem for you Say what you would like them to do about it

Dear Council Head, I am writing
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letter to complain
you
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about the high noise disturbance happening
due to
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construction
at
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in
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my adjacent building. I am Riya Sachadeva
living
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, living
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at Royal
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. My neighbours decided to upgrade their home by constructing a new room;
however
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,
this
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has been impacting
me and my family
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my family and me
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in several ways. They
offen
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often
work
untill
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until
late hours at night and at random timings during
day
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the day
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. As
,
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I am a working woman and these continuous loud noises are not allowing me to sleep peacefully at night.
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, I could not focus on my work
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day
due to
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lack of sleep.
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, it affects my physical and mental
well being
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.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, my daughter is preparing for her exams, but she gets distracted
while
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trying to study. I kindly request you to pay your attention to
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matter. I would
appriciate
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appreciate
it if you could
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them to use noise cancellation doors, have
fix
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working hours
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during
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day
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the day
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time
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, and confirm the outcome in writing at your earliest convenience. I would look forward
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your prompt reply. Thank you for your time and consideration! Yours faithfully, Reem Sheikh

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grammar
Fix many grammar mistakes. Say: I am writing to complain about the noise.
structure
Make the order clear: first the problem, then how it hurts you, then what you want.
organization
Use three short parts: intro, effect, and request.
vocabulary
Check spell and word use. For example: untill -> until, appriciate -> appreciate, advice -> advise.
content
Clear aim at the start.
tone
Polite and formal tone.
structure
The closing is proper.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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