A friend of yours is feeling stressed because of work and studies. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think ther are stressed? Give advice on how to relax. Suggest how can you help?

Dear Gaura, I hope you are doing well. I've just noticed that you've been under a lot of pressure lately, and I wanted to check in and share a few thoughts
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might help you cope better with everything on your plate. I believe that the main reason you're feeling stressed
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to the double burden of full-time work and ongoing studies, which leaves you with very little time to unwind. Since you're constantly juggling
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deadlines, assignments, and office responsibilities, it's hardly surprising that you feel mentally drained . When expectations pile up without adequate rest, even the most resilient person
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overwhelmed. That said, there are several ways you could rejuvenate and regain balance. One effective approach would be to create a realistic schedule that includes
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, as regular pauses can prevent burnout. If you'll be able to set aside even 20-30 minutes a day for activities you
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be it walking, listening to music, or practising
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, it could work wonders for your mental health. Remember, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
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, I'd be more than happy to support you in any way I can. If you like, I can help you revise your study material or share some of your workload by proofreading assignments. Alternatively, we could meet over the weekend, which would give you a chance to relax and talk things through. Knowing that someone has your back can make a world of difference. Take care of yourself
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better days are just around the corner. Yours lovingly, Shifali

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grammar
Fix small grammar errors that can change meaning. For example, 'even the most resilient person feel overwhelmed' should be 'feels overwhelmed'.
vocabulary
Choose plain words. Some long words like 'rejuvenate', 'mindfulness', or 'burnout' are not needed in simple writing. Use 'rest', 'calm', 'time off' instead.
structure
Keep one main idea in each paragraph and use short, clear sentences to help the reader.
purpose
Clear aim: the letter talks about why you are stressed, how to relax, and how you can help.
tone
Warm tone that shows care and support.
structure
Good opening and closing
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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