The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The map illustrates the blueprint of the university's sports
courts
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and some of its facilities in 1990 and now.
Overall
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, it is clear from the map that there are some parts replaced and others doubled. In 1990, there was a cafe and a reception , which has remained until now. The reception is located between the cafe and the changing room.
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, there was an outdoor pool on the north-western side of the sports
courts
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area. Two tennis
courts
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are placed on the southeastern side.
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, a
park
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covers a large area, which is located in the north-western side. There was a car
park
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below the
park
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. In terms of the current blueprint, the previous pool is replaced by an indoor pool. The changing room is expanding and has moved to eastern, located above the fitness centre , which
has been
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created recently.
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, parking spaces have been replaced with tennis
courts
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, which have been doubled to four.
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, the
park
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is converted into be basketball court.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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