The map below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The map illustrates the blueprint of the university's sports
courts
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and some of its facilities in 1990 and now.
Overall
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, it is clear from the map that there are some parts replaced and others doubled. In 1990, there was a cafe and a reception , which has remained until now. The reception is located between the cafe and the changing room.
Also
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, there was an outdoor pool on the north-western side of the sports
courts
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area. Two tennis
courts
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are placed on the southeastern side.
In addition
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, a
park
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covers a large area, which is located in the north-western side. There was a car
park
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below the
park
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. In terms of the current blueprint, the previous pool is replaced by an indoor pool. The changing room is expanding and has moved to eastern, located above the fitness centre , which
has been
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was
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created recently.
Furthermore
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, parking spaces have been replaced with tennis
courts
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, which have been doubled to four.
Finally
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, the
park
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is converted into be basketball court.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words courts, park with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • facilities
  • diversified infrastructure
  • accessibility
  • expansion
  • investment
  • indoors fitness activities
  • modern health trends
  • transformation
  • commitment
  • sportsmanship
  • competitive sports culture
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