The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995–2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the
number
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of telephone calls in the UK differentiated by three categories. The graph is concluding data from 1995 to 2002. Three categories are divided by their call type. Both national & international call and mobile call experienced growth over the year. But the speed of growth was different between the two. The graph illustrates a steady increase in national and international calls. Different from national and international calls,
mobile-call
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mobile call
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numbers
balloons
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balloon
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from 1999 to 2001. Even with
this
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dramatic rise, the
number
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of mobile calls is still unable to compete with national & international calls. On the other side, the local call encountered a different journey. From the year 1995 to 1999, the
number
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increased at a steady rate. It peaked in 1999 but steadily declined until 2002. In 2002, local call was in the same position as it was in 1995.
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, all of the call types have their own pattern of trajectories. The local call might have seen a decline until 2002, but the
number
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of calls still exceeded the other two lines.
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, the graph could suggest that in the coming years, mobile calls could exceed all other types
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the exponential boom in the UK.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number of minutes
  • telephone calls
  • categories
  • local – fixed line
  • national and international – fixed line
  • mobiles
  • general trend
  • yearly totals
  • significant changes
  • milestones
  • data
  • rise significantly
  • decline
  • steady increase
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • exponential growth
  • over the period
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