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A few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the use of others is rapidly declining. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Introduction
Some
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accents
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variues
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various
countries
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language
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languages
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spread
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englected
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been
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This
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Body paragraph 1
Increasing Talking some
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due to
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, I could say
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countries
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require particular
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 to study or
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work
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instutotions
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institutions
,
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universities
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authority
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compensation
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, some
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languages
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the english
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english
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language
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interesting
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numerous
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 to employ or study. Because the essential
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subjects
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methods
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don't achieve
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 droping utlize of other
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languages
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countries
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 . The main reason
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behind
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languages
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is
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cause
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cultural background for
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example
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people struggle
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languages
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public ears because
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langauge
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so
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the
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 prefer to
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switch
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the language
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that is
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spred
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spoken
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Conclusion
Overall
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,
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increasing
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 in any country is predictable for several
reason
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reasons
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 and
its
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it
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play
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plays
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 a
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vital
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equiping
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equipping
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is conterbuits
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there fore
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,
It
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it
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 is understandable way
government
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governments
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 tend to support
individules
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individuals
gain
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deifirent
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different
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language
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languages
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task
Say if you think the change is good or bad in the first line and keep this view in the essay.
task
Give two or three clear reasons and give simple examples.
coherence
Each paragraph must have a clear idea in the first sentence, then add a reason.
coherence
Use join words like 'first', 'also', 'but', 'however' to link ideas.
language
Check spelling and fix big mistakes so the meaning is clear.
content
The topic is real and there is some attempt to discuss both sides.
structure
You try to use more than one idea about the issue.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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