The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart provides key information about the age of library members public library in a town called Little Chalfont in 2016,
whereas
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the
table
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represents the proportion of total
loans
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by category (2016).
In addition
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, the
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illustrates the total
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of
loans
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(2007-2016).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
adults
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aged 18-64 had the largest
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of participants.
Additionally
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, children's and
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' fiction books had the highest percentages. The
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of
loans
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in the bar chart fluctuated.
According to
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what is shown in the pie chart,
adults
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aged 18-64 accounted for 51 members,
whereas
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young
adults
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(13-17) had only 12. On the
table
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, children's and
adults
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' fiction books
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38%. Adult non-fiction
loans
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accounted for 13%. Other categories represented less than 10%. On the
table
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, it is noticeable that there was a gradual increase in the total
number
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until 2011. After that, there was a slight decrease from 2011-2014, and the
number
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rose again, reaching slightly more than 20,000
loans
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words table, loans, number, adults with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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