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Band 1

The co-working is planning to improve. What do you think could be improve. Write informal your friend

Hey July, How are you? I hope you’re doing well. Did you get an email from the hub manager? I recently received it , and it made me very happy because they asked for my opinion. I’m planning to suggest that they add fast and reliable Wi-Fi. It would
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 private rooms. What do you think could be improved in the co-working hub? I’d love to hear your ideas. Lots of love, Maftuna

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task
Try to add more plan at the start and more detail for each idea so the reader sees a full view.
coherence
Link ideas with easy joins like 'and', 'also', 'but' to help flow.
grammar
Fix spaces before comma and use full stops to end thoughts.
content
Clear purpose and friendly tone.
tone
Easy words and calm style that fit a friend letter.
lexical
Simple and clear message about what to change.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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