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The use of artificial intelligence (AI) is becoming increasingly widespread in various c. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays
, artificial intelligence is in demand almost in every country.
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 significant technological breakthrough. In my opinion,
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 it has some problems ,
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it mostly
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 brings us to the next step of the revolution.
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views
 with relevant examples before reaching a conclusion. AI has become popular very
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quickly
, and still finds new consumers.
For instance
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, the most popular one is a chat gpt, which was developed in
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 few years.
This
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 app is answering questions,
this
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 is the
simpliest
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simplest
 explanation of
this
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 system. As
the
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 result, people's
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 getting easier, and for
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this
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 is the biggest plus.
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, some individuals consider that
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artificial intelligence can be harmful
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, sometimes people do not even try to think
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, and completely believe
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AI
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. If we are not pushing our
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, we will become too lazy for everything. Unfortunately,
this
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 is a large minus,
espesially
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especially
 for
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the young
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 generation.
To sum up
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,
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 could say that if
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appear
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 in good
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 it will bring only advantages. People need to understand
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that
 it is
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a tool
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 for future
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, and
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the prons
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prons
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pros
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 side outweigh
cons
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the cons
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structure
Plan your essay. Say your view in the end.
language
Use easy words and short sentences.
content
Give more facts to back your view.
coherence
Link ideas with words like first, next, then, but, so.
structure
Make each idea its own paragraph.
conclusion
Finish with a strong last line.
structure
There is a plan in the opening.
content
You show both sides.
content
ChatGPT is named as an example.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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