An increasing number of people are now using the internet to meet new people and socialise. Some people think this has brought people closer together while others think people are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

More individuals are utilising online platforms to strengthen human connections, and opinions are divided on whether
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trend enhances better relationships or causes alienation On the one hand, Online platforms have undeniably bridged social gaps. Functionally allows individuals to maintain connections regardless of distance.
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, applications like WhatsApp or Instagram enable families living in different nations to interact face-to-face in real time, fostering a sense of closeness that was previously impossible.
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, technology acts as a vital tool for maintaining bonds
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, relying too heavily on virtual communication able to lead to isolation. Critics argue that online friendships often lack the emotional depth of physical interactions.
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, excessive screen time decreases the chance for real-life socialisation. A common example is seeing a group of friends at a cafe looking at their gadgets
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of communicating with each other.
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suggests that
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we are connected digitally, we may be emotionally detached from those physically around us In summary,
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the internet is a tool for strengthening human connections across great distances, I believe it can
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create a barrier to genuine intimacy if used excessively. In my opinion, digital communication should be used to complement, not replace, face-to-face interaction to avoid the risk of alienation

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structure
Plan your essay. Write a short intro that restates the topic and what you will talk about. End with a clear conclusion.
content
Give each idea a clear reason and an example. Try to tie the idea back to your view in the final line of the paragraph.
language
Use simple grammar and common words. Check for mistakes in spelling and word form so the meaning stays clear.
task
The essay talks about both sides and ends with your view.
coherence
You use clear signs like 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand' to show two sides.
content
There are real examples (WhatsApp, cafe scene) to back points.
Your opinion

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