These days many people interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food What are some reason people prefer organic food ? Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?

In the Current dispensation, there is increased interest in the purchase of organic
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other than conventional
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among many individuals despite the fact that the price of the former is higher than that of the latter. I think it's crucial to order these organic
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products irrespective of their high fees. In the first paragraph am going to discuss the reasons for organic
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preference, and in the second one, I am going to talk about the reasons as to why I think it's important. The fear of getting cancer from eating conventional edibles. There is increased concern about the health side effects of most conventional groceries
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most of these, especially their precursors before processing them into final products, are believed to be sprayed with dangerous pesticides during their
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, these chemicals persist in the flesh and on the leaves of these plants after harvest, even after thorough washing, and when
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, there are a lot of reports of
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pesticide DDT in the bodies of patients who regularly consumed crops that were sprayed with
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chemical
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death, so people nowadays are generally cautious because of
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me, it's useful to eat organic staples to protect babies and young children from having mutations. I believe that most of these conventional staples are obtained from herbs and animals which are genetically modified. Animals and fruits have their genes improved in order to enhance their survival traits.
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, plants grown in deserts are modified to make them resistant to the limited water and hot conditions of dry areas. Humans get the building blocks of their DNA from these plants and animals, but the intake of modified nucleic acids and polynucleotides and
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hormones end up causing serious
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issues to young children and babies,
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causes poor congenital development and a series of weird incurable mutations like weak hearts, livers and kidneys that are sometimes fatal sooner or later. In conclusion, despite the taxes on consumables obtained from precursors which are not sprayed or genetically modified being extremely high in comparison with
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conventional
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products. I believe it's wise for one to continue with the consumption of organic groceries to protect oneself from the severe health issues that originate from long-term ingestion of conventional edibles that would prove to be fatal.

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task
Your answer has good ideas but you need more clear proof and detailed points. Add clear examples for each idea and keep to the task.
coherence
Make better links between ideas. Use easy links like first, next, also, however, and end with a short conclusion.
grammar
Try to use shorter, clear sentences. Check spelling and word choice so you do not say wrong things in science or health.
lexical
Use easy words and simple facts. Do not use big words or new facts that you are not sure of.
content
You raise the topic of organic food and give health ideas.
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You use examples about pesticides and gene work.
tone
You show care for the health of kids in your plan.
Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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