The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015.

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charts provide key information about

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people's likes of restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015

Overall

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, it is clear from the graph that Chinese,

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to Indian

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restaurant

, had a good proportion ,

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Mexican lower one in the chart

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what is shown, Chinese is higher at 34% proportion , the Indian restaurant is the second one. I see that people in Canada like Chinese restaurants than indian ones when we look at the numbers In terms of the Mexican restaurant ,

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Japanese , the proportion is very

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, shown as 1% I think the people in Canada do not like it

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Feb 17, 2026

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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108 words

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favourite takeaways
people in Canada
number of Indian restaurants
1960
2015
types of takeaways
popular
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country
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