The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

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The bar chart compares the percentage of the global
population
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with the proportion of global
wealth
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held in eight different regions.
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,
wealth
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is unevenly distributed across the world.
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North America, Europe and rich Asia-Pacific account for the vast majority of global
wealth
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, regions
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as India, Africa and China hold much less despite having much larger populations. North America is the wealthiest region, possessing around 35% of global
wealth
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, despite having only about 6% of the
world’s
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population
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. Europe and rich Asia-Pacific
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show a similar pattern
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Europe has approximately 15% of the
population
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but almost 30% of global
wealth
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,
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rich Asia-Pacific holds about 24% of the
world’s
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wealth
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with only 5% of the
population
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.
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, poorer countries show the opposite trend. China represents almost 25% of the global
population
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but holds only around 3% of the
world’s
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wealth
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. India and Africa follow a similar pattern, each accounting for about 15% and 10% of the
population
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, respectively, yet possessing less than 2% of global
wealth
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. Latin America only shows a slight imbalance, with around 8% of the
population
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and roughly 4% of global
wealth
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. In summary, the chart highlights a significant global inequality, with
wealth
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heavily concentrated in a few regions
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the majority of the
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population
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holds only a small share.

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