The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart provided illustrates what types of employment Anthropology
graduates
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have from one university,
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the table given shows how much money they make after 5 years of work.
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, most
graduates
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are employed in full-time and part-time jobs,
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fewer majors in postgraduate study. Meanwhile,
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in
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for
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freelance consultants and the government sector after 5 years of work show high
salaries
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. Looking at the graph closely, one can see that more than half of the
graduates
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start their career in a full-time job: 52
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,
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5
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per cent
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of students take a part-time job and postgraduate study at the same time, which is a higher proportion than not known: 8
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.
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, Anthropology
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show high
salaries
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related to the government sector
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ranging over $100,000 accounts for 50 peㄱcent.
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, people who work for private companies tend to make lower
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compared to the other two types of employment.
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,
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earned ranging from 50,000 to 74,999 and 75,000 to 99,999 account for 35 percentage and 25 percentage respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, salaries with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • employment sectors
  • academic research
  • non-profit organizations
  • government agencies
  • private sector employment
  • further studies
  • unemployed
  • salary range
  • earning sectors
  • salary disparities
  • career trajectories
  • financial outcomes
  • market value
  • general employment trends
  • relative market value
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