A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Explain why you think he/she would enjoy a camping holiday -Describe some possible disadvantages -Say whether you would like to go camping with him/her.

Dear Hanna, It has been a long time since I have seen you. So, you can probably easily imagine how thrilled I was when I received the letter from you. Personally, I think you will be more than pleased to have the summer holiday in the middle of nowhere where the materiału

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at hand.

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, I’m obliged to give you some insights into the ups and downs of the camping holiday. First of all, please keep in mind that the weather conditions in

this

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part of the country might be atrocious. So, the best option for you is to wear suitable clothing so as not to get wet and stay warm.

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, as you might

know

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know,

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some people, and

honestly

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honestly,

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I don’t know how good you are at managing

this

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situation, can’t stand insects.

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why

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apply

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I really recommend that you

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apply

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have some insect repellent to prevent any insects from entering your tent. I would be more than glad to help you with some stuff

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such

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, such

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as pitching a

tent

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tent,

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if you want me to join you. What is more, I can help with choosing the best equipment just before your adventure. Do not hesitate to ask for assistance if you have any questions or concerns. Big hug and stay in touch Joanna

podkoscielnajoanna

Feb 19, 2026

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content

Make your two main ideas clear: why camping is fun and what could be hard. Some lines join thoughts a bit.

structure

Try to use one main idea in each paragraph. Start a new paragraph for a new topic.

content

Add a clear line that you would love to go camping with your friend.

language

Check spell and choice of words. 'material' and 'materialu' are not right here. Use 'gear' or 'supplies'.

cohesion

Use simple links like 'then', 'also', 'but' to connect ideas.

tone

Keep a friendly tone and end with a warm goodbye.

tone

Friendly tone and warm sign-off.

content

You offer to help with gear and tent work, which shows you are ready to join and help.

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You think about weather and bugs, which shows you care about comfort and safety.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

216 words

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