You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organisingan event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organiser, Luis. In your letter - offer to make a popular dish from your country - describe what this dish is - explain why it should be included in the event

Dear Luis, I am writing to discuss

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fresh idea with you, which may be placed

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event

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. I believe it would be lovely. I would like to offer

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Taiwanese-style fried rice

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I will make it in person

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I just wish to share

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everyone, and I wish to get your permission for it. Have you ever tried Taiwanese fried rice? It's

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, it's made by shrimps, corns and special oil, it's really popular in my country; trust me, you would love it! The reason I recommend

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dish

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event

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International Students' club, and I'm really pleased to share the best thing from my culture. Thank you for your time and consideration

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hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully Chris

chrislin923

Feb 20, 2026

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grammar

Fix the small grammar errors. Use 'a Taiwanese-style fried rice', not 'an Taiwanese'.

structure

Make each paragraph have one main idea. Start with your plan, then describe the dish, then say why to pick it.

tone

Keep a formal tone. Avoid phrases like 'trust me' or casual words.

content

Give details such as how many people you will feed, when you will cook, and how you will serve it.

content

You state your goal at the start of the letter.

content

You say you will cook the dish yourself and share it.

tone

You end with a polite sign off.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

129 words

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