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Write a letter to your friend, who is also in the reading club. Write about your feelings and what you think the organizer should do about the project. Write about 50 words.

Hi Tom, Hope you are doing well. I’m really excited about the new reading project in our club. I think we should choose an interesting novel
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 a mystery or adventure story
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, because
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 everyone enjoys that kind of book. It would help if the
organizers
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 planned quizzes and group discussions to make the meetings more fun and active. Let me know what you think about it. Write back soon! Best, Ali

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Task response
State one main idea in each paragraph to help the reader follow.
Coherence and cohesion
Use simple links like and, then, so to join ideas smoothly.
Greeting/closing
Friendly start and end.
Engagement
Clear ask for a reply.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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