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The diagram outlines the book publishing process

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The diagram illustrates the process of different steps involved in publishing a book. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that
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this
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 process requires both human
labor
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 and machinery. It contains a range of stages, and starts with writing, ending with distribution to bookshops.
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 what is shown in
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, the first stage starts with writing a book, before delivering it to publishing houses. After
carefully analyzing
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, the handwritings and structure is checked by editors. Thereby, company
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that
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 deals with publications
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apply
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 directly sign a contract with
publishing
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the publishing
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 sectors, ensuring its formality. Once it has been completed, humankind deals with designing and decorating its layout and
make
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 final touches to decide on
format
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the format
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. After that,
printing
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the printing
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 procedure is applied to
formalize
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 it and sent to binding to compress it and make it well-structured.
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, they are distributed to book
centers
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, where
it
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they
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could
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 be sold.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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