The following maps show some of the changes that have taken placein Dubai in recent decades Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons while relevant

The maps depict the changes that have taken place at the Clock Tower roundabout in Dubai from the past to the present.
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, the area has become much more urbanised with a large increase in buildings and traffic,
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the central monument has remained the main feature. In the past, the roundabout was surrounded by open land with only a few buildings in the background. The roads were relatively empty
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there was a large amount of unused space.
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, a small number of trees were planted along the streets
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the whole place looked less developed. At present,
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place has transformed into a busy urban centre. Many tall skyscrapers have been constructed around the roundabout.
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, the number of vehicles has increased significantly
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the roads are now
more crowded
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busier
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. The central monument remains in the same location,
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grass and trees can be seen around it.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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