Write a letter to your neighbour about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home. In the letter, you should: describe the damage say how you feel about this problem suggest to him what actions he should take.

Dear

Mr.

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Sharma, I hope you are doing splendidly. I am writing

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letter to discuss the incident

happened

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that happened

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last

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night with my car.

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morning, I saw scratches

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the right side front of my vehicle.

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, I checked my security camera and figured out that you hit my automobile mistakenly

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parking your jeep.

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it was

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an unitentional

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unitentional collission

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unintentional collision

, but its your

resposibility

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responsibility

to compensate my loss from your insurance. I would appreciate

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you take necessary prompt actions as soon as possible.

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, I

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attached my email if you need pictures of my car for

insurance

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the insurance

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claim. Yours faithfully, Simran Kharoud

simranpreetkaurkharoud207

Feb 26, 2026

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Be clear on what you want. Say what happened, how you feel, and what you ask him to do.

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Use one idea in each paragraph. Connect ideas with small words like 'and' or 'but' only when you need to.

tone

Polite tone at the start and end.

content

It says what happened and that action is needed.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

105 words

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