The bar charts illustrate the proportion of four distinct types of transport in the UK between 1965 and 2005.

The bar charts illustrate the proportion of four distinct types of transport in the UK between 1965 and 2005.
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, it is clear from bar charts that the proportion of private cars was the largest,
while
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recreational vehicles remained the least. The percentages of three types of transport decreased over the period,
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the percentage of private cars increased. Regarding the proportion of recreational vehicles, they were used the least in 1965, at 15%. The
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experienced a significant decrease to 5% in 1965, and
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it reached 8%
at the end
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of the period.
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, usage of transport remained almost the same. The
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started at 25% in 1965, and it decreased
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% in 1985 and 22% in 2005. İn terms of lorries and other commercial vehicles, they started at 20% in 1965. The
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remained exactly the same in 1985 and
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in 2005.
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the data, in 1965, the usage of private cars started at around 40% and increased dramatically to 55% in 1985. By the end of the period, the
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peaked at 60%.

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