The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

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The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood

Farm

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between 1950 and today.

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, it is clear from the maps that the

farm

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has undergone

modernization

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, especially with the addition of a

Farm

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shop,

parkings

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parking

, a barn, and holiday cottages. One road has been expanded to make way for the new establishments. In 1950, the North-east side of the village was used for sheep. In the present day, the sheep area has been replaced by four solar panels and a camping field.

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, two parking areas have been added to the roadside for the holiday cottages and

farm

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shop. On the north-west side of the village, a

farm

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shop has been built

added

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in the area which was used for fruit trees. In 1950, the

South-east

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Southeast

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side of the village had a barn. In the present day, it has been replaced by holiday cottages. One road has been expanded to make way for a barn.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

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