The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood

Farm

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between 1950 and today.

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, it is clear from the maps that the

farm

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has undergone

modernization

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, especially with the addition of a

Farm

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shop,

parkings

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parking

, a barn, and holiday cottages. One road has been expanded to make way for the new establishments. In 1950, the North-east side of the village was used for sheep. In the present day, the sheep area has been replaced by four solar panels and a camping field.

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, two parking areas have been added to the roadside for the holiday cottages and

farm

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shop. On the north-west side of the village, a

farm

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shop has been built

added

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in the area which was used for fruit trees. In 1950, the

South-east

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Southeast

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side of the village had a barn. In the present day, it has been replaced by holiday cottages. One road has been expanded to make way for a barn.

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Single idea per paragraph

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The presented maps illustrate the changes in the layout of Beechwood Farm between 1950 and today.

Some feel that individuals today spend too much time following political news while others feel politics deserves greater attention. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future, people many no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen in one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In some places, people live with their parents until they are in their twenties or even thirties. What might be the reasons? Is it better for young people to live with their parent or live alone?