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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People
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 have different views about the best way to read the
news
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.
Although
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 some
people
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 believe that
newspapers
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 are the most reliable source of
information
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, in my opinion, other
media
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such
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 as the internet and television are better options in modern society. There are several reasons why some
people
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 still prefer
newspapers
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 despite all the technological advancements in the
media
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 field.
First,
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newspapers
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 are considered more trustworthy because the
information
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 is usually checked carefully before publication.
Secondly
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, reading a newspaper does not require internet access or electronic devices, which makes it convenient for some
people
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.
Finally
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, many individuals enjoy the habit of reading a physical paper as part of their daily routine.
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, older
people
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 often buy
newspapers
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 every morning because they trust
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 traditional way of getting
information
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.
On the other hand
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, I believe that other ways of getting
information
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 are better as they provide more convenience to the users.
First,
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online
news
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 and television deliver
information
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 much faster than the papers do.
Secondly
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, digital
media
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 allows
people
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 to access
news
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 anytime and anywhere using their tech gadgets.
Last
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 but not least, other
media
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 sources often include videos and live reports, which make the
news
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 more attractive and catchy
which
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, which
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 in turn
make
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makes
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 them easy to understand.
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,
people
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 can watch live
news
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 on their phones and immediately know what is happening in different parts of the world. In conclusion,
although
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newspapers
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 are still popular among some
people
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, I believe that digital
media
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 is more useful and practical in modern society.

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coherence
Use smoother links to move ideas in a clear map.
coherence
Make each point tie back to your main view.
task
Give more precise examples that fit each point.
task
Keep your view clear from start to end.
organisation
Shows clear view and a good layout.
coherence
Uses linking words to move between ideas.
content
Gives examples to support ideas.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Editorial oversight
  • Investigative journalism
  • Digital divide
  • News cycle
  • Sensationalism
  • Media literacy
  • Filter bubble
  • Echo chamber
  • Citizen journalism
  • Paywall
  • Fake news
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