The increase use of mobile phone and computers makes people lose the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that

exaggeration

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the exaggeration

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of using new technology will reduce communication between

people

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. In

this

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essay

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essay,

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I will show how I accept or reject

for

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apply

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this

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statement. First of all, I accept that mobile

phone

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phones

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telephone

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telephones

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and computers reduce communicate face to face. You can text, call or maybe by video call,

instead

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meet

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others to just say or talk about daily life. Technology

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helps by keeping distant

people

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in touch; video calls and messages help plan meetings and work; for some

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people

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people,

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online talk is easier. Long decades ago the

people

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have

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had

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to take a lot of distance to meet

ones

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each other

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. Nowadays,

person

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people

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don't care about

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and

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, and

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they

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want to do everything easily than in the past.

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Also

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people

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day by day think

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that doing

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daily

habit

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habits

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quite

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is quite

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easy.

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, the frequent usage of smartphones or laptops to connect with others is another method to create some common topics between acquaintances.

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to say

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modern society

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so busy in their daily routines and are accustomed to updating their living status on their social media.

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, it is beneficial for friends to know your current situation so as to phone you if you happen

any

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to have any

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particular incident.

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, I reconnected with my elementary classmate because she saw my posts on Instagram and knew I was in Canada, so she called me to confirm whether I

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back to Canada. Through

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incident, we reunited again.

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, to keep using Facebook or Instagram to record

people

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's lives is another choice to trigger another conversation between pupils. In conclusion, Balance is key; set rules to use tech well; encourage in-person talk when possible; teach good use of devices at school and home.

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Feb 26, 2026

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task

Have a clear view in the start and keep it in all parts.

coherence

Each paragraph should have a topic sentence and link ideas with clear words.

task

Give a fair balance; show both side more evenly.

grammar

Fix grammar and use simple, correct sentences.

lexis

Use easy and real examples that fit your point.

content

The essay tries to discuss both sides.

structure

Intro and conclusion are present.

examples

There are real life examples to show ideas.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

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Linking words for giving examples:

for example
for instance
to illustrate this
to give a clear example
such as
namely
to illustrate
take, for example

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

290 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

face to face
in person
talk
chat
text
call
video call
phone
computer
online
message
social media
long distance
plan
meet
balance
rule
habit
good
bad
plus
minus
eye contact
body language
listening
care
time
people
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