The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with date opened, kilometres or route and passenger numbers per year in millions. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

This
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table compares the
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systems
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in London, Paris,
Tokyo
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, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles. It illustrates the date
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,
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route
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the route
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and the
number
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of
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passangers
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passengers
every year. There is a significant
differences
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difference
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in the portion of
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and users of both
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old and newer railways. London has the oldest
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system
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, dating back to 1863.
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, its
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has the
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largest
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route
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and
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of users; 394
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kilometres
and 775
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passangers
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passengers
yearly. In the second
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place
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comes
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Paris and
Tokyo
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's
systems
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with slight variation between them.
Tokyo
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's
railway
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opened in
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1927
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1927,
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while
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Parise's
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Paris's
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system
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was working 27 years earlier.
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, the
route
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of
paris's
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Paris's
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railway
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is
bigger
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longer
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than
Tokyo
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with
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, with
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about 50
kilometers
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difference.
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, the
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of riders of
the
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Tokyo
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's
trains
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train
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system
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is around 800 million more. In the third place
come
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comes
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the
Washignton
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Washington
DC
system
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(1976) with 126 kilometres
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route
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of route
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and 144 million
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passangers
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passengers
.
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,
comes
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come
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the
newsest
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newest
railway
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sysems
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systems
of Kyoto ( 1981) and
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Los Angeles
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(2001). They have the lowest range of
routs
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routes
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and
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passangers
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passengers
in comparison to the other cities.
To sum up
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, the table shows a
greate
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great
gap between the
kilometers
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kilometres
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of
route
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and the
number
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of
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passangers
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passengers
among these six
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systems
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. There is a clear connection between the date of opening and the
route
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and
number
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of riders
with
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, with
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the oldest
systems
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coming in the first
place
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place,
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the the most recent established ones
hve
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have
the lowest rates.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, systems, tokyo, route, number, passangers, system with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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