Some people think that governments should spend money on raiways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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the first group believes that policymakers should concentrate on developing railways,

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, vice versa, opine that

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construction is more important.

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there are many supporting arguments for both viewpoints that could be mentioned,

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essay will concentrate on the discussion of two of them. On the one hand, the railway transport, mostly

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more ecological.

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, the bridging of various living areas by roads has a crucial economic effect.

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, the following paragraphs contain information and examples about the mentioned opinions.

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with, environmental and , especially

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pollution

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became vital across the globe.

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, the development of a railway transportation

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could be the solution because train engines commonly use electricity as a power source

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of fossil fuels.

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, the environmental impact is almost absent, taking into account

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of passengers could be transported by a developed train

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compared with other options.

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infrastructure is crucial for the economy , especially in suburban and rural areas. Highways, bridging distant towns, suppliers and customers, factories and warehouses are vital like blood in a body. Concrete and asphalt pathways do not have as strict requirements as railways and can be constructed flexibly and rapidly.

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has significant importance for transportation

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and commodities when speed and variety of destinations are key factors. Time is one of the most important things in business, environmental , and economic

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delivery by vehicles through a developed highway

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is the best time/cost option nowadays. In conclusion, railways have an advantage as a more eco-friendly transportation

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compared with others and provide long-term benefits

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that a broad, well-maintained

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is as necessary for business and economy as oxygen.