The table below shows the percentage of first-year students who gave a ‘very good’ rating to the resources provided by the college, for three courses. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart provides information about the proportion of first-year

scolars

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scholars

who

recieved

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received

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awesome mark

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from

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the sources supplied by the college for several

specializes

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, it can be clearly seen that

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Commerce pupils were the most successful in all aspects. Another striking feature is that

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print always topped the list

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other

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disciplines. Looking at the details, as regards pre-course information and other resources, they demonstrated a downward trend.

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, Economics had 59 and 60 per

cent

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respectively.

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, Law was the second with 72 and 80 per

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, and as

usually

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, commerce

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95 and 81 per

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, when it comes to teaching, tutor and print, it went in another direction.

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econimics

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economics

and commerce had the same 95 per

cent

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in teaching, but law was only 62

percent

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per cent

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tutor

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the tutor

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was the most favourable for all(90, 76 and 93 per

cent

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). Regarding print, they accounted for 81, 70 and 85 per

cent

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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159 words

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