In some parts of the world, people buy far too many clothes. What are the reasons for this? How can people be persuaded to reduce the number of clothes they buy?

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modern world, the difficulty of the

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of clothing has been a widely debated issue. In

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clothes

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explain the measures

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to solve

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problem. The primary cause of the waste of clothing is the short-term popularity. Nowadays, the style of dressing is frequently changing year by year; most people

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the up-to-date tendency of outfit.

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trend leads to the terrible

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of clothing, as people replace lots of old clothing by purchasing new ones very often.

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, a famous retailer of clothing,

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as Uniqlo, which provides the latest and most popular contemporary

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. Unlike most

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brands, Uniqlo changes the style of commodities

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seasonally

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is one of the most significant

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to consumers, because it brings the satisfaction of

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to buyers.

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causes a severe disaster with the massive

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clothing. To address

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issue,

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can take

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to promote

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environmental awareness to

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public. In modern

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that the protection of

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is important, and the most efficient way is to

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it

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ourselves;

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, we can try some clothes with higher quality,

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it might be more expensive, which is possibly

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more durable,

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can strongly decrease the number of

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. In conclusion, in

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modern generation, the trend of fashion is inevitable

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, it is

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responsible

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for

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us

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to protect our planet.

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the power of personal perspective is limited, it can be enlarged

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everyone of us

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an effort.