The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The process illustrates the salmon's life cycle, from being an egg in the river to an adult fish in the

ocean

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, there are three main stages in

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process, starting with the initial incubation of eggs, followed by the estuary rearing, and

lastly

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migration to spawning areas to repeat the cycle.

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they spend a little time in the estuary, the majority of their lives are spent in the

ocean

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. Salmon live beginning with the incubation of eggs in the tributary, after that they emerge and are reared in freshwater, which is followed by moving to the estuary area to grow there and to travel to the

ocean

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. Adult salmon live for

salmons

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is starting with migration to special growing areas in the

ocean

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, once they reach their destination, they start to grow and mature.

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, after that , they migrate back to spawning areas in the river to repeat the cycle.

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