The charts below show the number of working hours per week, in industrial sector, in four European countries in 2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

The column graphs compare the number of
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spent working per
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by industrial
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in France, Denmark, Sweden and the UK in 2002. Generally, in three countries, it
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obviously
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that the maximum hour for working
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36-40
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in France, the maximum
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is
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31-35 per
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. The majority of working
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in France accounted for 50%. The next most common category was 36–40
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, at 35%, which is the standard working time in
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three countries.
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, some
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spent 46–50
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working per
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, accounting for 20%. The remaining working-hour categories were around 10–15%.
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, in Denmark and Sweden, they spent 70% and 80% of
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respectively worked between 36 and 40
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per
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, which is the highest percentage among the other countries. In Denmark, about 20% of
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workers
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spent
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31-35
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working per
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.
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, the rest of the working
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accounted for around 10%. Meanwhile, in Sweden, the second and third percentages come from
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-35 hour and 41-45 hour categories, at around 35% and 25% respectively. The rest of
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the working
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hours
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category accounted for around 10-20%
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, in the UK has 50% of
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worked
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36-40
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. Some
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also
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worked more than 50
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per
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, accounting for over 20%, which is the second highest after minimum
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. The working
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. around 41-45 and 46-50, accounted for about 15% and 19% respectively. The other
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are accounting
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for around10%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, workers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
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