The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

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the comparison of exports
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several states in millions of dollars over a five-year period from 1999 to 2003.
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, it can be clearly seen that all
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of Japan illustrated an upward trend. Another striking feature is that Myanmar at the beginning
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not an export. Looking at the details, as regards Japan and Colombia, they weren't really changed. Colombia accounted for almost 500
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in 1999, after that, it witnessed an
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gradually to 700
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dollars in 2002.
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it exported 600
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.
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, Japan made up around 600
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initially
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during the
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it had approximately 500
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of export in 2003.
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, when it comes to Myanmar, it went in another direction. In
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it was at zero.
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, it demonstrated a substantial growth to 800 in 2000,
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the subsequent year
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rose to more than 900
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. Unfortunately, it experienced a considerable reduction in 2002 to the number between 300 and 400
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dollars, but it indicated an improvement to probably 400.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • clothing exports
  • country
  • highest
  • lowest
  • rise
  • rise steadily
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • grow
  • drop
  • change
  • stay the same
  • peak
  • reach a peak
  • hit a high
  • gap
  • difference
  • big gap
  • narrow gap
  • widen gap
  • compared with
  • in contrast to
  • whereas
  • over the period
  • from ... to ...
  • trend
  • pattern
  • overall
  • in general
  • year
  • data
  • show
  • indicate
  • point out
  • lead
  • lead in exports
  • top country
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