Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

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emergence

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larger

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and factories

have

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transformed the possibilities of

people

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living wherever they prefer. To illustrate

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case, there

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a lot of

people

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that

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would love to live in a more rural area

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they are very limited

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their workplace. I am inclined to agree that the everyday traffic problems or the wild search

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house hunting can be partially solved by moving the

companies

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and factories to a more

accesible

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accessible

area. A major advantage of the new locations of the

companies

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in

a

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countryside

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is that their workers could be way more efficient in their job

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the lack of stress that they suffer. Mostly because they won't have to face speeding with their car or leaving home more than two hours earlier to be

sharply

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sharp

at the office. Not only that

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,

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fact that they will be able to arrive more

camly

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calmly

to their offices will improve their focus

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making

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completing

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a task because they won't feel tired already. An example of

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can be a man who has spent more than three hours driving in traffic to arrive

to

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the

factory

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and

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by the time he

arrives

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he is

feeling

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already completely tired.

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,

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can lead to a positive impact

in

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the environment

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less

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gas emisions of the cars.

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, as much as it is an advantage for the workers, it can

also

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be a disadvantage for the

companies

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and factories.

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, a

company

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that is

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located in a more

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countryside

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rural

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area can be

more hard

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harder

to find or locate for their clients or investors from the city. One

drownback

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drawback

is the decrease in sales the

company

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can

faced

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by having a more unknown

location

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for the majority of the

people

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.

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, the difficult

location

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of the

company

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can be

paid

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compensated for

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with a decrease

on

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in

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the popularity of the brand.

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, if the

location

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of the

factory

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is not in the

center

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of the city,

people

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would have less knowledge of the

company

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name.

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will lead to less recognition per

part of the

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person

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people

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so

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it will be mirrored in the sales of the

company

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.

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,

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apply

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this

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problem can be solved with the use of the new technologies nowadays to promote the brand. All things considered, the

location

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transition of those

companies

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to the

countryside

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can make the

worker's

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workers'

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life

more easy going

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easier

, with a result of a more positive impact

in

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on

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their everyday routine.

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the

company

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can face challenges by moving their

factory

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to

a

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the

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countryside

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, with the new technologies and the way everything is more

eassy accesible

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easily accessible

through the internet,

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type of problems reduces to zero.

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of the day,

companies

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should

prioritize

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the health and benefits of their workers because they are the ones who make the

factory

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work.