The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts provide information about Little Chalfont library, including the age distribution of its members, the proportion of its

loans

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by category, and the total number of

loans

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between 2007 and 2016.

Overall

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, the percentage of adults was dominant in library membership by 2016,

while

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fiction

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books were dominant across all loan categories at the same time. Between 2007 and 2016, total

loans

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grew gradually. Regarding loan categories,

fiction

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dominated overwhelmingly, with both children's

fiction

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and adult

fiction

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each accounting for 38% of total

loans

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By contrast

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, other categories

such

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as DVDs and

audio books

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audiobooks

occupied a small proportion at just 1-2% each.

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according to

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age

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the age

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of memberships, adults were dominant across all members at 51%,

while

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children were only 22%. Between 2007 and 2011, the total number of

loans

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increased gradually, before experiencing a modest decline by the next year. By the end of the 10-year period, the number of

loans

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reached its peak.

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Mar 20, 2026

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Vocabulary: Replace the words loans, fiction with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

157 words

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