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The table shows the amount of total waste produced in million tonnes in six different countries in three years

The following table displays the
number
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amount
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 of
waste
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 produced
that
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by
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 six different countries
can produce
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.
Overall
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, the country that produces the most
waste
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 was the United
States
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,
while
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 the
others
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 numbers are quite similar. In 1988, the country that could produce the most
waste
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 was the United
States
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(107
million
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tonnes
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). The country that could produce the least
waste
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 was Scotland,
it’s
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with
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 only 3
million
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tonnes
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. The
figure
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 in Ireland and Poland
was
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were
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 equal at 10
million
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tonnes
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. In 1992, the
nation
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nations
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 that can produce
waste
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 the most and the least remained The United
States
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(150
million
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tonnes
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) and Scotland(2
million
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tonnes
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), respectively. In 2000, the nations that produced the most and the least were the United
States
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 and Scotland at 209
million
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tonnes
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 and 5
million
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tonnes
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, respectively.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Contractions: Don't use contractions.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, states, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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