The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1997 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the

amount

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number

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of Asian elephants from 1997 to 2004.

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beside

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Cambodia and Laos maximum population of Asian

elephant

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elephants

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in 1997

is more

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higher than

2004

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in 2004

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. In both of the

years

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India hit a peak and achieved the biggest

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and

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China hit a low with

smallest

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number

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. In 1997

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Vietnam, Cambodia, Laos and China had a similar

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is around 1000. India shows the

most

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ultimate

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and

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it is just under 10000. Malaysia and Sri Lanka were very close to each other, approximately 3000. Myanmar display between 5000 and 6000, in Thailand

that

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numbre decrease to just under 4000. In 2004

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Vietnam, Malaysia, Cambodia, Laos and Thailand had a ressemblance and they

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around 1000. India again shows the highest

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with

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approximately 7500. Sri Lanka presents just under 3000

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China illustrates the lowest

number

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which

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is around 500.