The map show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment.

The maps provide a current layout of an
office
Use synonyms
building and a plan for its next redevelopment.
Overall
Linking Words
, it is clearly seen that several changes will take place, with the kitchen and
grass
Use synonyms
being the most noticeable ones. One of the most important changes is to the kitchen, which is located in the west corner of the map. Some facilities,
such
Linking Words
as the canteen and storeroom, are close to it,
while
Linking Words
others
like
Punctuation problem
, like
show examples
the
WCs
Punctuation problem
WCs,
show examples
are farther away. In the future
office
Use synonyms
building,
this
Linking Words
kitchen area will be removed to build an
office
Use synonyms
. Another significant change is the
grass
Use synonyms
, which will be situated in the southern part of the map. Some services near it are the entrance and WCs,
while
Linking Words
the
grass
Use synonyms
is located in the northern corner, far from them. In the coming years
for
Punctuation problem
, for
show examples
the
office
Use synonyms
building,
this
Linking Words
grass
Use synonyms
will be demolished for a coffee machine, meeting area, and chairs.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words office, grass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: