The chart shows the proportion of renewable energy in the total energy supply in 4 countries from 1997 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below illustrates the renewable
energy
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supply of four
various
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countries in a 13-year period.
Overall
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, it is
accurate
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clear
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from the chart that
Iceland
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has had the biggest
energy
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supplies among other countries,
while
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Sweden
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and
Australia
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have lacked renewable
energy
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supplies. By 1997,
Australia
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and
Sweden
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had almost the same number of sources of renewable
energy
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, which were about to reach 10. At the same period, giant owners of renewable sources were
Iceland
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with roughly 45 and Turkey with a bit fewer than 40. By 2000, supplies of
Australia
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and
Sweden
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had decreased to around 8,
while
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Turkey witnessed a small increase and reached a bit higher than 40. In
this
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time,
Iceland
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has climbed to a solid 60. By 2010, Turkey and
Australia
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had lost their
energy
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sources, falling to approximately 30 and 5,
while
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huge and small amounts of
energy
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by
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were gained by Iceland and Sweden
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Iceland
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and
Sweden
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were gained, rising to a solid 70 and almost 10.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, iceland, sweden, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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