The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie chart illustrates the average proportion of

sodium

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, saturated fats and added sugars consumed at breakfast, lunch and

dinner

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as well as

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consuming snacks in the USA.

Overall

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dinner

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and snacks are seen as the primary source of these nutrients.

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sodium

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and saturated fats intake peaks during

dinner

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, added

sugar

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is mostly consumed during snack times. Even though

sugar

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is the least consumed at

dinner

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, with 23% only,

sodium

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and saturated fat follow a similar pattern, with

dinner

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being the primary source for both, at 43% and 37% respectively.

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, lunch shows a similar pattern, where saturated fat is 3 percentage points lower than

sodium

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(29%), and

sugar

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accounted for just under 20%. From there, breakfast seems to have the least amount of the distribution of these nutrients across the day, with

sodium

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being slightly less than 15%, followed by fat and

sugar

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at 16% during the day.1 In stark contrast with snacks, which have a significant percentage of consumption of

sugar

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, at 42%,

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saturated fats, followed by

sodium

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, at 21% and 14% of the daily total.

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Mar 26, 2026

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium, dinner, sugar with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
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Heart disease
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Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
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