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Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from others sources (such as the internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Introduction

This
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recent years. Understanding
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knowledge
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 and
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 is very easy these days with
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 of
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the internet
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 and sites that explore
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 of understanding. From my perspective, and to be fully honest, the role of the teachers is really important
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 nothing can replace it
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 with the power of AI and networks.
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, studying in your room by using any recent tools is just something that can help you get improved more in subjects that you
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already should know from your teachers in school.
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 in touch with the trying of teacher to help you
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 the
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 is something very helpful
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, you will
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 the ways that he told the facts
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. I can't deny the benefits and the
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assistance
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these days
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, teaching videos of multiple subjects could be available at any time with differents way to learn the subjects, but it could be
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 at the same time if the network
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 unstable.
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, being in school with
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 teachers is helping you to be more focused and motivated.

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Write a clear answer to the question in the first part. Say if you agree, disagree, or partly agree.
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Add a short ending that repeats your main view in a simple way.
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Use one main idea in each body part, then explain it and give one clear example.
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Link ideas with easy words like first, also, however, for example, and in conclusion.
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Make your examples more clear and real, so they support your point better.
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Keep sentences in a better order, so each part is easy to follow.
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Your main view is clear: teachers are very important.
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You give both sides of the topic, which helps show thought.
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You use paragraphs, and this helps the reader follow your ideas.
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Some linking words are used, such as however, for instance, and furthermore.
Fully explain your ideas

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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