As a result of deforestation and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, illegal hunting is becoming ubiquitous. It causes a lot of harmful implications ,

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as the extinction of some

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. From my perspective, I wholeheartedly believe that we have to preserve all types of

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for future generations by setting more penalties for lawbreakers and encouraging new measures to protect them. First of all, any type of creature has a substantial impact on our planet. Starting from small insects and ending with dominant predators, they create an imperative food chain in the environment, which is essential for all animals, including homo sapiens.

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, in 1986, in Zambia, the wild rabbit population in the region fell dramatically

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because people had been actively hunting for them. These events led to an increase in hunger levels among wolves. Eventually, they began to attack local villages in order to find some food. To solve

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concern, authorities must revise their constitution and

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establish nature reserves. Because of today's methods, which are ineffective and inadequate, the number of endangered

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that are in the Red Book is getting bigger and bigger every day. The EU created a set of laws that prohibit hunting numerous

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, and they constructed a significant number of animal reserves that can save them from dangers, resulting in the level of illegal hunting being halved. Other countries have

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followed their lead and started to foster their prohibitions too. Ultimately,

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illegal hunting endangers the stability of the wildlife and gradually reduces the number of rare animals. To deal with them, the government should establish

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environment by building more facilities for animal

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and rules to protect them.