Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

The map illustrates the evolution of Chorleywood village during the construction in 1868 and 1994. In general, there are four phases of development, with the noticeable alteration are the development of the housing zone and the improvement of the connectivity infrastructure. In detail, in the initial period, the rural area only had a pair of arteries, running from the east to the west
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the second road
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from the north to the south. In the first stage,
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to 1883, a small residential area was built parallel
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the south artery. Following that, a larger residential building
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appeared in the 1883-1922 period.
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, two housing estate was developed, surrounding the second housing zone. Altering markedly,
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-1994 period was a significant modernisation,
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a motorway was paved. Simultaneously, a railway had been constructed, crossing the second block of housing, where a station was
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developed. Concurrently, five latest
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that
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lots of
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were managed to be built near the intersections, offering an accessible location for most villagers.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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