The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph
illutrates
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illustrates
the mass of recycled materials collected between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it appears that, in general, the most recycled materials, in
order
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order,
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are paper, glass, tins and vegetal
wast
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waste
.
Secondly
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,
recycling
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the recycling
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trend
decline
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declined
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in 2012 and increase the next 3 years to its highest figures in 2015. The least productive
year
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for the recycling industry
is
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was
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2012, with the lowest peak of each material except paper
which
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, which
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will reach
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reached
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its minimum the
year
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after. Indeed, vegetal
wast
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waste
this
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year
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twice
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is twice
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less than
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as much as
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usual. The most efficient
year
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in
this
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sector is 2015, with all materials getting their widest stats. indeed paper had
a
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at
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least 20 million tons more than its average
on
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over
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the four previous years

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Waste collection
  • Recycling centre
  • Rise
  • Fall
  • Amount/Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Anomaly
  • Pattern
  • Data
  • Significant
  • Notable change
  • Regulations
  • Public awareness
  • Local policies
  • Prediction
  • Future trends
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