The charts give information about employment in the UK in 1998 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart illustrates information about

men

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's and

women

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's employment data in the UK between 1998 and 2012.

Overall

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, there is a slight decrease in career chances between 1988 and 2012. Especially in the range of full-time jobs. Meanwhile, the duration depicts a huge increase in the number of employers between 1988 and 2012. Based on the chart,

men

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in 1988 had more opportunities to be in a full-time job

with

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per cent

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percentage

of 53,

in contrast

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women

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had a percentage of 19 in 1988 having a full-time job.

However

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this

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data is completely different in 2012,

while

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women

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had an increase with a percentage of 26,

men

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had declined by a percentage of 47

comparing

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, comparing

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it with 1988. For part-time employment,

women

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had a slight change between 1988 and 2012, adding 2 per cent only in 2012.

On the other hand

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men

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had a tiny adjustment in their rate, which added 1 per cent only in 2012.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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159 words

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