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The chart below shows the percentage of people in a country who used three different types of transportation (car, bus, and bicycle) between 2010 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | Year | Car | Bus | Bicycle | | ---- | --- | --- | ------- | | 2010 | 60% | 25% | 15% | | 2012 | 62% | 24% | 14% | | 2014 | 65% | 23% | 12% | | 2016 | 68% | 22% | 10% | | 2018 | 70% | 20% | 10% | | 2020 | 72% | 18% | 10% |

The chart below illustrates the percentage of people who used three different types of transportation (car, bus and bicycle) between 2010 and 2020.
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 showed a steady increase,
while
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 both bus and bicycle
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 declined over the period. On the one hand, car
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 rose gradually from 60% in 2010 to 72% in 2020.
In contrast
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, bus
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 showed a steady decline, falling from 25% to 18%.
On the other hand
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, bicycle
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 recorded the lowest figures in every year, starting at 15% and falling to 10%. By the end of the period, cars accounted for the majority of transportation
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,
whereas
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 bicycles made up the smallest proportion.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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