In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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choose to live in a nursing home, where they can have nurses to look after them.

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should pay for

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because it should be one of the

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programs provided by the

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, and support households to reduce expenses in taking

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of

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. In an ageing society, nursing homes should be one of the main

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programs that the

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should offer, especially in countries

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where people pay a huge amount of taxes, as when they earn money after tax deduction, some people might have only a small amount of money left. So, it is difficult for them to save up for their retirement,

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, tax payers tends to rely on the

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, if you are more than 80 years old, you can register at the social council or submit

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request to live in a house with nurses provided.

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, everyone should be able to access

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for free.

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, their families do not need to be worried about leaving the

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at home for work because there are caregivers constantly checking on them.

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household costs have

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been raised

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, if the authorities support the expenses of aged

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, it helps the populace to reduce the costs that they need to spend on supplies, e.g. eldery diapers, shower chair, ventilator, etc.

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,

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require intensive

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, especially for their health; they might often be requested to go to the hospital for a checkup, so their family need to spend both time and money on that. In some cases, when the family members cannot go to work, they will not get paid on that day, which means they lose their income. In conclusion, aged

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or nursing homes should be under the

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's responsibility, as it should be considered

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a basic

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that everyone has got an authority to access, and to help people to reduce the expenses in aged

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