The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features ,and make comparision where relevent.

The given line graph illustrates the
number
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of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017, categorising them into 3 distinct groups.
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,
it is clear that
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there was a slight increase in the total
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of
visitors
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,
while
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visitors
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who were staying on the cruise ship and on the
island
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both experienced a fluctuation in the
number
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of tourists staying. In 2010,the
number
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of tourists staying on cruise ships was around 0.3
million
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,
visitors
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staying on the
island
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was around 0.7
million
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.By 2017, the
number
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of travellers staying on cruise ships had increased slowly , and the
number
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was almost 2
million
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after a slight fluctuation in 2012.
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,
visitors
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staying on the
island
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experienced a slight increase,
although
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this
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was stable in 3 consecutive years from 2013 to 2015 and
then
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reached 1.5
million
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in 2017. Regarding the
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number of total
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total number of
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visitors
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to the
island
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, it was just 1
million
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in the year 2010. After 6 years, the
number
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shows an upward trend and increased steadily, reaching 2.7
million
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by 2016. It reached the highest total with a dramatic increase, aggregating 3.5
million
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visitors
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in the
last
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year.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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