*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for *IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph line illustrates the information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries.

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, Myanmar increased sharply in the first

period

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of the following years, after that it fluctuated

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However

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, Colombia decreased slightly, next to that it was stable , than darmatically increased

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Japan was the highest at the beginning of the shown

period

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then

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it fell sharply

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Between 1999 and 2000, myanmar grew increasingly from 0 to 800

million

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dollars, after that in 2000 and 2001 it sharply increased by one

million

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, By constract in 2002 it highly dropped from 900 to 300

million

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then

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grew gradually at the following years,

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colombia increased the most, japan showed a slight decrease, from 600

million

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dollars to 500 approximatly,

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, Between 2000 and 2001 japan showed a gradual growth in somewhat, it fell repeatedly from 600

million

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to 500 over the

last

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three years of the

period

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On the other hand

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, Colombia was the lowest ranking in the

first

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Next to that, it doupled a twice than before; the year 2001 grew from 650 to 700

million

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Furthermore

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, in the

last

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year of the

period

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, it fell sharply to 600

million

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Apr 8, 2026

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, million with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

exports
clothing
trend
increase
decrease
comparison
figures
data
notable
peak
trough
exporting countries
standing
relative
pattern
disparity
over time
growth
decline
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*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Human activities have negative effect on plant and animal species. some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. discuss both views and give your opinion.

More and more newspapers and news channels are using photographs to support their news articles and stories. Some people think that photographs are not a reliable source of news, while others consider photographs to be irrefutable. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

The increased availability of consumer credit in some countries has contributed to the problem of debt. Who is responsible for high levels of indebtedness: the financial institutions that lend money or the individuals who borrow money?

Some think secondary and high school students should be allowed to choose academic courses leading to university or practical courses leading to careers such as carpenters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?