The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below illustrate the structure of a

bookstore

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in the year 2000 and the present time.

Overall

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, it can be seen that the map distinctively shows the various features, which include an entrance, and other segments of different genres of books like

fiction

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, non-

fiction

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, art, hobbies, etc., of the

bookstore

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in the respective time periods. In 2000, the

bookstore

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had two large segments allocated to

fiction

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, but currently,

fiction

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books occupy 1/4 of the

initially

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allocated segment, which goes ahead to show a drastic decline in

fiction

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On the other hand

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, non-

fiction

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slightly increased and was moved from its position in 2000 to presently replace a segment of

fiction

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while

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the entrance, new books, service desk, and travel maintained the same size and position in the

bookstore

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In addition

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, the arts, hobbies and cookery segments were moved from there

initially

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position in 2000, which was at the centre of the

bookstore

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, to occupy 2/3 of the space previously occupied by

fiction

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in 2000.

However

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, the

bookstore

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currently has a cafe beneath the sets of round tables and next to the service desk.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bookstore, fiction with synonyms.

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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183 words

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