The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts compare the intake proportions of three nutrients on a daily basis through four types of meals, in terms of average consumption by individual. There are three diagrams
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sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar percentages. Generally speaking, night supper is responsible for the majority input of sodium and saturated fat,
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snacks become the main source of sugar.
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, fewer of those nutrients
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come from morning consumption.
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the first and second figures,
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dinner
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in the majority input of sodium and saturated fat, which the prior form 43% and the later make up 37%. At the same time, lunch shows a modest figure
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those groups, representing just over a quarter. Showing a different pattern, in comparison, a great number of sugar level take up by snacks, which amounting 42%. Meanwhile, its slight level
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night
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meal.
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, breakfast
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the smallest share for all those groups after all.

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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percent
  • share
  • meal
  • breakfast
  • lunch
  • dinner
  • snack
  • high
  • low
  • more
  • less
  • same
  • different
  • increase
  • decrease
  • pattern
  • trend
  • compare
  • contrast
  • overall
  • daily
  • intake
  • data
  • show
  • point
  • food
  • eat
  • up
  • down
  • tend
  • when
  • than
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