People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

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prison. The question is , are they right

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in four walls could be effective on the bad people

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if they have families to care of out side the jail.

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could not be seccssful choice for them and for the community. The main reasons going to support

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some prisoners act more badly and angry after the end thier

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jail. To illustrate , they

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be thinking to make some new crimes

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them spend a healthy

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them more about their

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the important point is to give them

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personality. From my

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agree that not every one deserve that.

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Apr 13, 2026

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Answer both sides more clearly and say your own view in a direct way.

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Give one or two clear ideas for each side, then explain each idea more.

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Use examples that are easy to understand and closely linked to your main point.

coherence and cohesion

Put one main idea in each paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Use simple linking words well, like first, however, for example, and in conclusion.

coherence and cohesion

Check that each sentence follows the last one in a clear order.

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You discussed both views and gave your opinion.

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You used an example from Saudi Arabia, which helps your ideas.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay has an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.

coherence and cohesion

You tried to link ideas with words like on the other hand, moreover, and lastly.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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